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115749 No. 115749
#Traditional #Digital #Canon #OCs #Gallery #Discussion #Taking commissions #Critique wanted
Yes I am trying a less anthro look more like the show

I'll still draw anthro stuff because I like it but I'll post my clean and non anthro here as well.

My DA (My cleanest gallery)
http://theburningdonut.deviantart.com/

I have commissions available as well

But I want opinions on how good I am at Ponying and suggestions on how to improve!
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>> No. 115751
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My most recent attempt be BROO-TAL!
>> No. 115765
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>>115751
Well, the body language and expressions of the characters are great. Very expressive, both in terms of emotions, and physical movement. The fluid and dynamic style of lineart compliments this very nicely, making for some very dynamic artwork.

The physical proportions are cumbersome in some respects. Looking at the upraised foreleg in >>115749, for example, the bicep and forearm look fine, but the rest of the leg seems quite short. Compare to:
>Pic
...In which the leg beyond the wrist is about as long as the bicep and forearm combined.

The shape of the face... okay, I might not be the best person to comment on this, given my personal preferences... but the faces are stylized to the point where the physical structure seems implausible. I'm fine with stylistic art, but when it gets to the point where a head stops looking like a physically plausible shape, well, that kinda kills it for me.

For example: in >>115749, looking at the eyes and nose alone, considering the angle they're facing, the far side of the head shouldn't be visible at all.

>tl;dr Version:
The work has a couple of shortcomings, substantial ones at that, but it's pretty solid overall and has an energetic and expressive look and feel... I like it.
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A new one!
>> No. 117335
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Here's an anthro one!

*dodges bricks and rocks*
>> No. 117341
>>117335
I don't think I've ever seen negative comments about anthros on here. =] This looks pretty great imo
>> No. 117375
>>117335
>*dodges bricks and rocks*
>I don't think I've ever seen negative comments about anthros on here. =]
I threw those, actually, because those boots totally don't go with that katana.

I'm cool with anthros, tho.
>> No. 117530
>>117375
She's dressed as a Character called Cutie Honey!
That's why the clothes are ghastly!
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Another new one!
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>>119877
Not bad, the eyes are buggin' me a bit, though. They seem a bit flat and run pretty far into the side of the head. Makes the head look like it's a bit pancaked when heads should be generally longer than they are wide. Also the tail is really bushy and it reminds me of a squirrel, but that might just be the style, like the cartoonishly wide cheekbone.

Just some friendly advice.
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A video comes with this one!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v7Ggo9o-xiE
>> No. 120723
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I do commissions as well!
>> No. 127375
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>> No. 127378
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Trying new stuff
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Honestly I'm experimenting with different styles of shading and stuff I would love advice
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>>127674

I'm really enjoying this art style. Nice work!
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>> No. 127821
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Don't lose your WAAAAAAYYYYYYYY!
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>> No. 128017
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An IRL commission
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Another IRL commission!
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