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#Critique wanted

Gais help, i am writing a Sweetie's big race parody but it's Dovahkiin escaping at the begining of skyrim.

This is what ive gotten so far.

We need to move!~
Run up the stairs.~
Gotta move some rocks.~
Holy shit dragon!~

Were did it go?~
He got Tor Shul’d.~
Jump to inn!~
Fucking inn is on fire!~

run out of the inn.~
Kid get over here!~
Stick to the wall.~
Fucking dragon’s Right above me!~

But when im about to die.~
And They’re about to take my head.~
He is there to save my flank.~
Spare my life from those Dickheads.~

Yes i love that Dovah Alduin.

Yol.
Tor.
Shul.

thats all i got, need help.
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