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122100 No. 122100
#Traditional #OCs #Critique wanted

Hey Ponychan, /mlp/ here. After returning from the black pit of our draw thread I thought that I might get a second opinion on this drawing.
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>> No. 122103
>>122100

Overall, not that bad. I'd rise the sticky-outy part of the back leg a bit, and the slightly hidden eye looks like it's popping out. mlp art does this a lot, but really the eyes should never touch the face-lines, or else it creates the image that the rest of that side of the face is nothing but a giant eyeball. The jawline also shouldn't be completely connected to the back-line of the head, instead the head should slope down into the neck, and have a little line pointing towards the jawline if that makes any sense.

I do really like his outfit, and how you're trying to keep him very-much a stallion though.
>> No. 122109
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>>122103

Updated version. I moved the eyes around a bit, also shortened his legs on the advice at some people from /mlp/.
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>>122109

After measuring the proportions on some other stallions I found the legs to be too short. Newest and final version.
>> No. 122115
Awesome revisions! You're well on your way to creating awesome ponyart~
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