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128118 No. 128118
#Digital #OCs #Discussion #Critique wanted

How bad is my style? How can i improve it?
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>> No. 128119
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another one. (I'm not very creative with poses, if it's not obvious)
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last one. Sorry
>> No. 128143
please
i need help
>> No. 128154
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legs seem a bit skinny. also, they should taper slightly from the hoof. on the first picture the thigh is kind of cut off with the belly-line. that line should go in between the thighs.

seems really thin in the chest and thicker in the back in pic 2 and 3 widen up the chest a bit, like in the first one.

try not drawing digitally, maybe? i know for me drawing traditionally first helped me improve digital drawing a lot. dunno if other people have this problem but for me holding an actual pencil/charcoal/brush and drawing on actual paper is easier than stylus on plastic.
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>>128118
Some thoughts of mine.
Made a show-style render of your pic (started drawing ponies 2 weeks ago, so I'm still grasping the style) for you to compare with.

With that said, there's a lot I like about your style already. It has a nice laid back tone feel, making it very suitable for funny comic strips!
>> No. 128157
I actually like what you've got going already. It can be refined though. Unless you want the style to be kinda "crayon kid drawing"-ish.

There is a plethora of tutorials here. Use them to improve your anatomy.
>> No. 128202
>>128118
It looks great but you shouldn't add hooves (: ( unles your doing big mac ) ;)
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>>128118
>>128118
I actually think it looks good. Better than what I drew pic. related.
>> No. 128475
It looks sketchy, but I wouldn't call it bad. Everything looks solid. Maybe a little work on the proportions maybe?


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