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128602 No. 128602
#Traditional #Canon #Gallery #Taking requests #Critique wanted

I just too up drawing.
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>> No. 128605
>>128602
If you just took up drawing, I'd say you're off to a fine start... well formed figure, nice sense of motion. Can't make out the caption, tho.

The two things that stand out to me are the length of the feathers... for pegasi, the second feather is the longest, and the one is shortest... kinda like fingers on a human hand. Also, they have four primaries. Easiest fix would probably be to add a slightly shorter feather on the leading edge of the wing... ie, on the side closer to the head (If I'm being unclear, i could do a quick redline).

Otherwise, you seem to have a decent eye for detail, considering that you got Dash's unique eye design right, and the notch in her forelock above her eye. A lot of artists gloss over details like those, it drives me nuts. X3

You also got her expression and attitude spot on, which is a much more subtle element.

At any rate, hope this helps some, looking forward more. X3
>> No. 128607
>>128605
Thank you.
I'll try my best and upload it when I can.
>> No. 128618
I'll post my future stuff here if anybody is interested:

I'm lazy to check a dozen sites:
http://bmf-draws.tumblr.com/
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128623
I have no idea what went wrong but it looks bad...
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128645
"Work in progress"
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"It's ready."
>> No. 128661
Hey, are you still taking requests? If so, will you draw OCs?
>> No. 128673
>>128661
Sure.


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