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128889 No. 128889
#Digital #Critique wanted

I-I made a few drawings of some antler chick I made up... Does anyone care to give me their opinions/critique?
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Looks dangerous.

But really, the first one looks like her anatomy's just a tad off. Like her upper torso should be turned, but it's actually flattened sorta.

The second one probably looks better because she's looking at the viewer, so it fits better.

I'm no expert, though.
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>>128891
I see... I'll try to give her body more depth, then! Thank you!


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