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43536 No. 43536
I made one a while ago but it's dissapeared into furthest pages.

Feel free to give any criticisms and critiques etc. I would really appreciate it.

My DA account is

I may also post one or two non-pony drawings that I've done.
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>> No. 43537
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I'll start from my earliest
>> No. 43538
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this was part of the other picture, but I just made it alot smaller
>> No. 43539
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I was trying something out in this one. Didn't turn out aswell as I had hoped
>> No. 43540
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This was before ponies. It's the Yogscast
>> No. 43541
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there's something that doesn't make any sense at all in this picture. I didn't even notice it until recently
>> No. 43542
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I hate drawing grass and I got lazy
>> No. 43543
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Was trying to be more cartoony in this one. Didn't turn out too well
>> No. 43544
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David Vs the green giant

Non-pony but it has a sheep in it
>> No. 43546
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Before this there was the banana luna one.
That's all the drawings that I've ever done on photoshop so far.
This is Yogscast btw
>> No. 43547
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There was this, a promo for a story I wrote. This drawings not good though
>> No. 43549
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Looks great, just RBD'S Muzzle is alittle square.
>> No. 43554
I was trying out a new style. Didn't work though.
>> No. 43665
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> this picture...
>> No. 43733
is that good or bad. I can't tell
>> No. 43783
I find this picture rather hilarious and kind of creepy at the same time.
But I like it. Count it as good :3
>> No. 43803
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it was supposed to be a design for but it got declined for pretty obvious reasons
>> No. 45227
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This was a request for a story that has been written by lightsideluc. These are death scenes from his story that he's written and all put here together.
It can be found here

His Da account

It's a good and funny story
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Here was another request for an author called Jrakob
>> No. 47676
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My latest drawing
>> No. 49527
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The ultimate shipping??
>> No. 51820
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2 panels of a 18 page comic that I'm doing ( these 2 parts are still WIP)
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18 panel comic that I just did. Too big to fit onto here so you'll have to follow the link.
What do you think?
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a surprise
>> No. 60518
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1000 years' war
>> No. 60931

:O That's cool
>> No. 79916
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Just putting this here to keep this thread intact
WIP of non-pony thing
>> No. 88025
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Applebloom in a rabbit costume
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>> No. 96960
Would anypony want to give any criticism on any of these? They are a bit out of date but any help would be useful
>> No. 97530
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not pony but still art
>> No. 104572
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I'm starting a Mass Effect/pony tumblr and this is going to be the display picture, for the time being.
This drawing isn't finished yet (still have to add the lighting onto her face, but it's getting there)

For anypony who is interested -
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Final version
>> No. 105721
I'll probably post most of the updates here, but also to the tumblr story blog thing.
>> No. 105723
Very cool. I'm not really a fan of crossovers or sci-fi MLP, but i bet this will be worth following just for the art.

As a disclaimer before anypony gets flank-hurt over the above: Yes, I know there's a difference between what I like, and what is good. Carry on.

PS: >>96960
Critique is kind of my thing, so I'll be sure to remember that you're looking for some Unless this is no longer the case, seeing as how it was posted three months ago.
>> No. 105784
Critiques are always welcome for old or new stuff. So if you feel like giving some criticism then go ahead. :)
>> No. 106603
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Will be animated later. Seeing what it looks like online
>> No. 107176
Taking a bit longer than I thought for the first updates because of exams and the colouring style but I'm still doing it in any free time that I have.
>> No. 110030
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Testing out gifs
>> No. 110031
If anypony has any ideas about what they would like to see in a Mass Effect / MLP crossover feel free to say.

Or if you have any questions about how I'm planning to do things.
>> No. 110032
Last thing:

If somepony sends me a message on tumblr and they have an OC that isn't too extreme, then I will probably use them as background characters because it's unlikely that I'll be able to think of good characters to put in background scenes.

Or if they give some feedback here or something like that.

>> No. 110068

Is it going to be based on the trilogy, or just one specific game? Sounds interesting either way.
>> No. 110176
It's going to be based on the trilogy but it won't follow it step for step. So it will have a similar theme to the trilogy but hopefully be different enough to be interesting.
>> No. 112431
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Panel 5, just posting this to make sure this thread does't get deleted
>> No. 112460
Feedback always appreciated, even if it's just something like, "I like it."
>> No. 112479
This image would make sense if I probably saw the other panels. There's a few things that look off in the values but nothing huge that would be distracting. The only thing I would remotely change would be the posture of the the dragon/spike?. I would bent his arm a little bit more just so it looks like he is typing, which I assume is what you're trying to get him to do. There are a couple of weird things about the image but this is me just nitpicking now. For starters, I don't know what that object is that's close to me, but it can probably be made out from the previous panels. I'm not sure how one would use that computer that's close to us without it being extremely awkward position. I >think I see a shoe and yet, the floor is sloping very steeply. Also, that light on the floor, I would dim it down a bit so that it wouldn't be a strong light source, but it would be a light you can see. Identical to the type of lights you would see in a movie theater. They aren't bright, but they are bright enough to see that this is a walkway.

Also, something I just realized. The light on that dragon I'm going to call spike is too harsh. From the rest of the picture, there seems to be a lot of ambient light. Even the desk and computer that have no light source on it is still pretty bright. I would either increase the brightness of that computer or decrease the shadows on him.

and here i said i wouldn't do large paragraphs and here i am writing all this out.
>> No. 112856
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Thanks for the advice. I'll try to change what I can, and the thing at the front is an armoured leg.
There are definetly things that I need to improve and that's one of the main reasons that I'm doing this.

Thanks :)
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Another panel.

Definetly learned a few things from this, was practice for perspective.
Also Twi's cheeks look a bit chubby, or is that just me?
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>> No. 112867
The thing that strikes me first is that the nostrils aren't level.
When placing nostrils, draw them at the same angle as the horisontal centerline of the head aka the line you place the eyes on.

So if the eyes are placed on a perfectly horisontal line, the nostrils should be placed on a perfectly horisontal line as well.
>> No. 112868
Also, eye highlights would help. =)
>> No. 112869

Thanks, I didn't really notice that the nostrils were a bit odd.
Btw do you mean an outline on the iris or one of the whole eye?
>> No. 112875
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I mean the white highlights in eyes. They add a lot of dimension and life.
>> No. 112959
Oh yeh. Thanks I'll try to add them without it looking weird.
>> No. 112973
First update.

I tried to add in what I could
>> No. 113052

Looks good
>> No. 113397
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Does anyone know any Mass Effect memes besides

Shepard. Wrex
I should go
creepy rape face
We'll bang okay?
>> No. 113406
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Mass Effect Nerd MODE!

Harbinger with his soft core innuendos, "this hurts you" etc.

Assuming direct control.

Your classic RGB puns nonsense of the endings, including recoloring the endings.

And starchild theories.

Those are all the original ones I can think of right now.
>> No. 113503

Thanks for those. Never noticed the innuendos before. I'll include them :)
Also assuming direct control, forgot that one

>> No. 113601
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Anyone got any advice for this one?
Btw her hair is a bit off nearer the bottom because of a collar from something she is wearing (you can see if from different angles in other shots)
>> No. 113602
Besides from the text being massive
>> No. 113626
The shading doesn't really imply a 3D shape. It looks more like a flat surface with grooves or indentations.

The hair drifts straight sideways. In the show, it flows in a generally downward angle. Even setting aside show accuracy, it looks blocky and static.

The engraving on both sides of her collar is highlighted, which looks unnatural.
>> No. 113653

Thanks for the feedback. The 3d aspect is something that I'll have to work on for all of my drawings.
The hair is something that I didn't realise actually flowed slightly downwards and the collar bits should be engraved and not as they are.

Thanks :)

>> No. 114580
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Any thoughts? There's a few things that I did mess up in this, well I think so.
>> No. 114582

Twilight's snout area looks a little weird to me. Not sure how to place it. I'm never too good with this type of thing.

Is this a new style you're trying or...?
I hope you don't take it the wrong way, either. I'm just curious.
>> No. 114585
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No offense taken. That is one of things that I didn't do as well as I wanted to. It was a practice for perspective, that's why it looks different.

Thanks for the info. I'll try to improve it for next time.
>> No. 114586

I'll be looking to see more! :) From what some others a long time ago have been saying (and some do now).. "Practice makes perfect."
>> No. 114714
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A panel from recent update
>> No. 114724
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Template for future codex entries.

The secondary or primary tabs will fade out depending on what's being looked at.

Text will go in that big space

Anything that you think I should change?
>> No. 114785
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With text
>> No. 115283
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Fan art.
Just keeping this page alive
>> No. 116177
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fan art of Rouge
>> No. 117215
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WIP of panel 1 of next update.
Will be animated
>> No. 117953
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Animation. May make it a bit smoother if the file size limit on tumblr lets me, but I quite like it like this.
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big version, non-animated
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>> No. 120150
Took me a while to see the ship in the corner
>> No. 120160
It could be my perception, but it seems like Twilight's horn is just a little out of place. Either that or the curvature of the helmet is a little off. Notice how that on the far side, the helmet doesn't seem to follow the curve over her head, and it looks like she's looking at a strange angle, while the horn is still pointing forwards. In other words; it looks like the horn is coming out of the right side of her head.
>> No. 120234
Yeh I had notice that, although I did notice it a bit late. I'm going have to try and fix that in photoshop somehow.

Thanks for that
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Just bumping so this doesn't get deleted
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Griffin reaper concept. Can't think of a name for this type of enemy though
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I approve of this

>> No. 122315
Thank you Sovereign, much appreciated
>> No. 122316
You are most welcome rudimentary creature of blood and flesh.
>> No. 122827
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Finished version
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just bumping to keep it alive
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Probably finished this one
>> No. 124308
"Enemies everywhere!"

"Hold the line!"

"I will destroy you!"
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Random panel

Last edited at Sat, Jun 29th, 2013 17:12

>> No. 124492
"This pistol doesn't have a thermal clip..."

>> No. 124493
Don't think I'll be doing thermal clips in this. :)
>> No. 124494
I know, making ME quotes is just my way of telling you good job.

After all I am an extragalactic scourge on all organic life. Well... My real name is Al as well...

Last edited at Sat, Jun 29th, 2013 17:44

>> No. 124498
Thanks and yeah thought so Sovereign :)
>> No. 125432
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Finally did an update
and just posting this here to keep this alive
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Good choice
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Just bumping with random art to keep this alive
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Just keeping this alive for the time being
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