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#Author #Collection #Discussion #Shipping #Second Person
Welcome one and all to the nineteenth edition of one the longest running threads on /fic/! All are welcome!

The stories within are mostly romance stories written in the second-person perspective, with a couple stray third-person fics. The stories within range from sweet and fluffy to hot and heavy.

Story Rating System:
[Fluffy] - Nothing serious, mostly cute.
[Fuzzy] - A real d'aw scene for the heart.
[Snuggly] - Hugs, peck on the cheek, etc.
[Tender] - Kisses, lying down together.
[Romantic] - Kisses w/ tongue, massages.
[Cheeky] - Moaning, overly massaging wings, hooves, etc.
[Saucy] - Very, VERY suggestive.
[Whoa!] - This goes as far as describing actual sex and CANNOT BE POSTED ON PONYCHAN.
Please mark all fics containing content inappropriate for ponychan as such if you are going to advertise them in this thread. Thank you.

For additional information, there's "The Central Repository of Sensual Knowledge", which contains everything vital from the past threads, preserved for threads to come!


We have repeatedly had collections posted on EqD, and have had a massive number of views and downloads! The collections themselves are put together by Sandman and Eights, who can both be contacted via Fimfiction. Want to be added to the list of authors? Email Coffeebean or TheGentlemanCreeper through fimfiction's messaging system.

Fimfiction group:

Posters both new and old always welcome; so sit back, put some power ballads on, and enjoy!
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>> No. 114165

Surprised me, too, but pleasantly, mind.


Good show, mate! It's not everyday you can make a downright naughty prompt SFW.


Agreed, now that four of us (hopefully) are on the boat.
>> No. 114229
Just want to make sure my gif wasn't misunderstood because I can't really tell one way or another by the response. Thor says 'I like it, I'll have another!' before the cup smash.

[email protected]
>> No. 114266
Yeah, without the words, I thought it was an angry gif. Glad you liked it, though!
>> No. 114292
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I don't know why I write this sort of thing. And I know, it's terrible, you don't need to tell me.

Pic is mfw I wrote this.
>> No. 114426

>You x the cat which I can never spell right

Add this to the group my good chum!
>> No. 115362
ITT Coffee is getting pissed off with deleting so many third-person clopfics from the second person fimfiction group.

Why isn't anyone else filtering it?
>> No. 115398
This is slashe. I haven't had time to do it as i have been working long hours. My hours have been cut recently so i can do it more efficiently
>> No. 115438
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Hey, among other things, we're getting an idea about an official SFG banner. We've tossed around some ideas, if we're going to do it ourselves or commission someone else, and other details.

If you have any thoughts, concerns, or suggestions, we're open to all of them.
>> No. 115955
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Newest story is out!


Rated [Saucy], containing heated makeouts, rave parties, and some sick bass playing.

>> No. 117296

The good news is, I've got some down time coming up. Some new content from me is very possible within the next month or two. I just wanted to let you all know before I just drop a fic in without any warning beforehand. If any of you remember me, that is.

The other good news is, I get to read all of the great content from you guys that I've missed. Maybe I'll drop in some reviews too.

Before I release anything though, are we still doing the Google Docs method of this stuff? Or have we moved on? I'm a bit out of the loop admittedly since I'm not here as much as I'd like to be...
>> No. 117303

Hey, welcome back!

I think the majority of us have moved on to FiMFiction.net for posting stories. It's much easier to get our stories out there that way. Link is here:

>> No. 117481
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May as well post my latest fic here for the sake of old times.

>> No. 117887
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Oh. My. God.

We're on 19?


Well, just finished Trixies of the Trade. [Snuggly]



Gonna start on my Octavia fic. Cheers.
>> No. 119934
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Hey, everyone. How are you? Good, I hope.

Anyway, I've got something new for you. It's a little different from the usual fare, and you can find it on my FimFiction user page -
Note that it contains gore material.

(Yes, gore material)
But, you know, I still think you'll like it; it's not your average gore fic, after all.

Title - Sweet Little Lovely : A Gothic Romance
SFG Content Rating - Tender
Synopsis -
Everyone in their sleepy little town knows that Marvelous, the clockmaker, has eyes for only one mare - the beautiful Little Lovely.
But he soon comes to realize that her true beauty is on the inside.
A romantic tale written in the tradition of nineteenth century horror.


Alright, cool.
Hope you like it.
I know I do.
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I'm deeply considering it
>> No. 119963
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Hey, what's up everypony? Just thought I'd send a fic your way! It's called 'Red Thrush Private School,' it's a 2nd Person Romance with the humanized main six, but Rainbow Dash is the mane focus of the story.

Rating: Tender/Romantic, but might boost up.

Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/40321/Red-Thrush-Private-School

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I am intrigued and wish to know more.
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Well, I'll try and address for you, the main concern I had when Mr. V was presenting the fic to pre-readers.

As a rule, I avoid [Gore] tags due to unfortunate stories like Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory. Why would I want to read stories where characters who I've grown emotionally attached to are killed and tortured for some horrible reason?

Well that's the problem with [Gore] tags, they're not all that informative. With authors revealing as little as possible in their summary (in order to hide the amazing twists and reveals of their story) a [Gore] tag could be anything.
It could be anywhere between a fight scene where the Big Bad is thrown against a wall having his head cracked open, to the graphic description of a torture scene, complete with hacked off body parts.

Sweet Little Lovely is neither of these, it is a Romantic story where the theme and moral that love transcends the limitations presented in the story are upheld in the fines of form, given the circumstances.
I wish I did not have to be so secretive in explaining why I can't telly you why it's not so bad, but I know Mr. V and Mr. V likes to keep his story secret.

The most I can tell you is that the gore isn't all that bad and it's not in the slightest bit cruel.

>> No. 120642

I second what Armada said. At first, I was turned off in the same way that he was. Then, I read said Armada post and decided to give it a whirl.

I was very pleased that I did. The romance was romantic, there were scary situations without being needlessly so, and there were some explicit descriptions of gore. It feels like an old classic that I'd never read.

I don't know what to say, other than that I recommend this story very highly.
>> No. 122329
HOORAH! for i have made my glorious return! good to see this thread continues to live! it has been far too long
>> No. 123195
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(You work in a small music shop in Manehattan when one day a curious black-maned gray mare walks in with a problem, you quickly fix it, but end up with plans by the end of the night. Is that even possible? no way life can be that good...)

>> No. 123196
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Crap, the rating for that story is [Tender]
(The story is revolved around you (the reader) and Rarity, who (you think) you fall in love with the day before Hearts and Hooves day, You have a potential to date, but as another Stallion much more handsome and rich than you (and more popular) comes into the scene, he steals away Rarity, however it seems she does not truly love him (you hope). it's now up to you to devise a way to win back Rarity's heart, or perhaps win it over at all.)

>> No. 125567
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Sooo, after a long while i finally have a SFG fic. It was supposed to be longer but i lost the will to finish it, so i wrapped it up quickly.

Introducing "The Darker Side of the Night"
Rating: Cheeky

You and Nightmare Moon share a tantalizing moment together in bed.

A Massage - http://www.fimfiction.net/story/63945/1/the-darker-side-of-the-night/a-massage

A mighty massive thank you to Mr V, Eights, Slashe, Shiny Glory, Whirring Gears and any of the others that i might of forgotten that has helped me along.

Image source: http://d16megatron.deviantart.com/?rnrd=20751#/d52xzhw
>> No. 125621
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Hey, there, everyone,
I've got a new little fic here for you.

Title: Buttershy Kisses
Rating: Snuggly
Synopsis: A short and sugary piece in which you spend a quiet winter day with Fluttershy --
who just happens to be adorably fat


I may add more chapters as I think of them.

But for now, it's just a little gooey Christmas candy, full of snuggles and attempted cuteness.
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"Room 213"
Current rating: [Tender]

Part 1: 'Wake-Up Call'
Part 2: 'Thorn in My Side'
Part 3: 'Collections'
Part 4: 'To Tataurus With Them'
*NEW* Part 5: 'Escape'


Man, it's been a while. Merry Christmas (one day late)!
>> No. 125960
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It warms my heart to see that sensual writing is still here. Where is my Mogu? The old days. Lol, we were the pioneers of sensual pony fics. I like short sensual stories. Whos got anything for me to read? No novels, just short, bite sized, well written sensual stories. Let me have it guys.
>> No. 125961
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I just DL'd the old collection. Ah the memories! I wrote some of those stories almost 3 years ago. But someone butchered the formatting and grammar on my "A Bad Nights Sleep" Story. Periods been removed, letters added where they dont make sense, and complete words are either misspelled or missing completely. Oh well. The memories almost bring a tear to me. It reminds me of when the fanbase started. Those virgin days of when the word "Brony" was still new.

I need a story guys. Inspire me to write.
>> No. 126808
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A collaboration between me and Kody910!

"Step Up, Don't Suck"

Bowling may not be your strong suit, but the Ponyville Bowling League is a chance to hang out with friends every Saturday. Especially Allie Way, who is right at home among the pins and bowling balls.

However, when things are said between all the noise of competition, blow hards, and rising tensions, what will this mean for you and your teammates?

Current Rating: [Fluffy]


Chapter One:
>> No. 127061
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I'm BACK baby!

And now we're going back to my Octavia.


Because while I was out not terrible fics, I was out drawing terrible drawings!
>> No. 127236
Last of the Zap-Apple Cider
[Cheeky] for kissing, hot breath in ear, neck nipping, playful smack, and suggestive language/implied stuff.

A one-shot about reminiscence on the good ol' days and octogenarian love. This isn't a trollfic, but it is a rather...contrarian shipping, shall I say? Feel free to pound the backspace button in horror or follow where morbid fascination leads you: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/20256/1/last-of-the-zapapple-cider/complete-story-oneshot
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"Room 213"
Current rating: [Tender]

Part 1: 'Wake-Up Call'
Part 2: 'Thorn in My Side'
Part 3: 'Collections'
Part 4: 'To Tataurus With Them'
Part 5: 'Escape'
*NEW* Part 6: 'Music'


Promised a deadline for tonight and I made it! I'm feelin' goooood.
>> No. 127483
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I've been doing some writing to clear my mind and try to buoy my enthusiasm. Somehow, I managed to make a story out of it!

A story about one, Sweetie Belle, after she's older and more famous. A story about breakfast pizza and weird delivery ponies. A story with good old-fashioned, non-sexual sensuality.

SFG Rating: [Cheeky]

Introducing, Sweet and Elite [www.fimfiction.net]
>> No. 127744
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Man, I still remember my tripcode. I think.

Anyways, in order to bring this place back to life, on Whirring Gears' behalf, I'm gonna post To Be Young And Stupid here. Might as well.


Rating: Snuggly, Safe for Work.
>> No. 127799
Wow, this is still going...

I miss you guys.
>> No. 127828
Coffee, I don't know if you'll see this or not, but I sincerely miss you and the rest of the IRC.

Hope everything's been good and you're still bossin' it up.

*Sappy closing note*
>> No. 127829
Speaking of missing people...

Damn, it's been a while, SFG. #Equestria's still limping about back on Caffie, if any of you guys are still here to notice. We need to start the place back up again, so drop on in if you get the chance, and hopefully we can get the ball rolling again.
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Gentlemen, I'm searching for an old fic. One of the first sensual fic's I ever read. The title is resonance. It's a second person(you) x lyra fic. Don't remember who it was by but if anybody could deliver, it would be very much appreciated :D
>> No. 127885
Check the collections: http://www.fimfiction.net/group/68/sensual-fiction-sfg/thread/9620/collections
Volume 2 seems to have a story called Resonance (and another LyraXYou story). Don't know if it's what you're looking for, but that's what you get for asking someone else to do your dirty work.
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Thank you very much sir
>> No. 128238
"Room 213"
Current rating: [Tender]

Part 1: 'Wake-Up Call'
Part 2: 'Thorn in My Side'
Part 3: 'Collections'
Part 4: 'To Tataurus With Them'
Part 5: 'Escape'
Part 6: 'Music'
*NEW* Part 7: 'Night'


Another post for the old thread. Been another while, I see.
>> No. 128528
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These kinds of stories are really delightful. Thanks to you authors who spin us lovely, romantic yarns like these. Almost every time I come to Ponychan, I check this thread to see it's come to life again. Oh, the old days!

I hope people are still writing these. It's a real craft, and I'm terribly envious of the people who can do it.
>> No. 128540
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Every time I come to Ponychan, I see this thread, and the level of detail in the sexiness scale, and it just annoys the crap out of me. It's a form of denial, a desire to see yourself as "better than" the saucier ratings because you're stuck with values of sex being dirty and/or forbidden.

There are only two true distinctions for sex's role: Romance either is or isn't driven primarily by sexual tension, and the story either does or doesn't contain mature elements. Not only that, but I would argue that it's denial (or childish naivite) to create a relationship titled "love" that doesn't have an angle of sexual tension.

That's ASIDE from the fact that I once challenged people to show me fics from here that didn't ride on the appeal of feel-good romantic schlock--or at least that succeeded in high drama and meaningful depth while also hooking readers that way--and they failed.

And the fact that come on what's up with having "a community for" or being "a fan of" the same subject matter over and over and over

And the fact that I actually find a majority of this thread to be low quality, but that's not a legitimate complaint, good on those people for writing. Even if I wish more of them would work on broadening; growing; improving.

Last edited at Tue, Sep 24th, 2013 16:16

>> No. 128542
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I agree that many of them are based on the same idea, are poorly written, and that it can get repetitive. I think that some of my favorite stories in the SFG are the very novel ones by TheGentlemanCreeper, especially "Swing" and "Freudian Slip." I'm not sure if you have read those, or if you'd rather not read them, but they're extremely well developed, satisfying, and I think they are closer to your ideals for a good story.

In any case, a lot of these stories aren't for everybody, and the rating system does seem a little vague and needless to some. I think it works well enough for categorizing the stories on FIMFiction even though the ratings are divided oddly. I wouldn't outright say the rating system encourages elitism in the writers who stay close to [Fluffy], although it might.

For many of the writers in the archives, these threads might have been great practice for fiction writing in general.
>> No. 128548
Does it bother you that people value sex more than you? That they see it as something more meaningful than you will ever have or be able to do with it? Because, unless you have some sort of issue of that kind, your little affliction seems nothing more than a kid looking at his actions, comparing to better others, and filling guilty.

Oh, and you challenge people to demonstrate to you something you had predispose them to fail based upon your own admitted prior biased? And they didn't somehow destroy those assertions? My, I'm certainly the innate concern you have didn't have anything to do with it.

But hey, between world creation physiological fluff and bad attempts at emotional fluff, I'm sure you can find the fluff here and notice your opinion is just as sickening as your attitude, and worse yet, you are doing nothing but making yourself a nuisance.

Good day, S.

Last edited at Wed, Sep 25th, 2013 03:03

>> No. 128552

I find that a solid majority of fics in here are samey schlock, which is an opinion I'm allowed to have, and the discussion was perfectly civil before you showed up.

My first statement was much more significant, and you seem to have misread it very badly.

Because I was accusing the bizzarely detailed "rating scale" of being based on something like the prudish values that you're incoherently ascribing to my dislike for this thread. It implies that you want to put warning labels on things like how intense the kissing gets.

Sorry for that disgusting couple of sentences. I'll clarify if I gotta.

Last edited at Wed, Sep 25th, 2013 10:02

>> No. 128558
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It's okay that TacticalRainboom doesn't like the rating scale. I think it's very useful for some people, and I rather like it, too. I had hardly read any wholly second person stories before I saw one of TimeBomb0's tales, and to me, it's a very innovative style. A lot of the plots are hackneyed, but the different spins on them can be fun and cozy. Many of them are truly great.

I'm afraid that my posting here in the first place might have been bad idea. I didn't mean to start a fight, I just wanted to praise some very fine authors. It's awesome that we don't have to agree completely about this group and that we all have different tastes. I probably should've taken my praise straight to the group on FIMFiction, too. Sorry if I have stepped on anyone's toes.
>> No. 128559

Don't post shit like that for pointless apologies, now I'm torn between wanting to tell you you're overreacting, and wanting to give Applejack a hug.
>> No. 128560
I also absentmindedly skipped the sticky thread on this board, and so I didn't read that we should "sage" posts unless we have a story or a review to give. My first post was really a trifle, and I'm not sure if it was proper to bump the thread with it.

I think this is the last time I'll post, Tactical. Thanks for the interesting talk.
>> No. 128561
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The... no-saging rule is stupid, so there's no harm in bumping this thread. Plus, you were "giving a review" by the barest sense anyway, on top of asking people who (might) check this board if they were still writing, thus expressing interest, and all in all doing nothing wrong.

I don't know why you were attacked for expressing your opinion (actually, I do, but I probably won't be able to explain it without being more confrontational than this post will be, anyway), but I am sorry that happened to you.

If you have anything else you want to post or comment on in this thread, please do. I'm sure that, if the authors of these stories are still watching, they appreciate your feedback. And if not, maybe you'll invite someone else to have a positive conversation with.

On that note...

Stop. Shitting. On the Sensual Fic General thread.

Just... stop.

See the link in the OP that says "Hide"? Click that. Seriously. Don't even reply to this post. Just click and leave.

Every post of yours in this thread is like watching someone dig themselves deeper into a hole of faux pases, so you need to make like a cliché and quit while you're ahead.
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I love these stories. Thanks for writing, guys! My favorites are Swing, Freudian Slip, and Friendly Games.
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