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127436 No. 127436
#Author #Single fic #Comedy #Adventure

Good day, /fic/. I am Slippy, an author from FiMFiction. I don't want to take up too much of your time, so I'll make it short and sweet: I need an editor.

My story, A Comedy of Terrors (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/67924/a-comedy-of-terrors) just received its second strike from an EQD prereader, and I've gotten two reviews in response. I won't share them in this post because they'll make it terribly long. However I will post them in the thread in a moment.

My point is that I am looking for an editor. I am doing a complete rewrite, word for word. If you'd like to help me edit the story, post here or PM me on FiMFiction here ( http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Slippy ) and we'll go from there.

If you just want to drop a review, post in this here handy-dandy thread.

Thanks. (I can never figure out how to end these threads...)
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>> No. 127437
Oh, forgot to mention, here's a pre-reader message:

take your story down to the fine folks over at PonyChan or MLPChan and hit up the Training Grounds threads on /fic/. Let them know that this pre-reader feels your story has promise but gets so wrapped up in 'clever' that it abandons its own themes within the first chapter, and then tracks dirt over them for the remainder.
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You've found the town, so let me direct you to the local workshop. Repost everything you have to ( >>126497 ) and then fill out this form: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/viewform?hl=en_US&formkey=dHRrclhMemtIT2txM19xbEtHOUQtMGc6MQ#gid=0

Last edited at Sat, Apr 27th, 2013 17:23

>> No. 127745
This story is being rewritten. Do you still want me to review it?
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