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No. 128808
#Author #Normal #Sad #Comedy #Grimdark #Basically anything. NO SHIPS

Ok, so I have a head cannon, can I get some constructive feedback? I believe that Gilda was exiled from wherever she came from, because she was weak flyer, so she went to flight camp and met dashie. She then returns home to her father ready to murder her on the spot for interacting with "pony scum" (as gryphons are not too fond of ponies) he then abuses her to the point of death and exiles her from the tribe. She lives other own for aboutm1 year before decoding to visit dash. Next thing you know we get to see a view of "griffen the brush off" from Gilda's pov.

You think it will have a chance? Feel free to fill in any blank spots you think should be filled....
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