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Chapters 3 and 4 are posted. You guys are just that lucky (...that I wrote one chapter that was more than twice as big as the ones I already had, and decided to break it into two).
If you notice anything like proofreading errors, holes in the plot (now that I have enough written to have one), insufficient setting/character development, continuity errors, poor execution of phonetic accents, etc, don't hesitate to point them out. Otherwise I'll have to worry about everything being bad, for lack of something specific being bad. That's just how I am.
Or, you know, you could always point out things you think are good. Crazy talk, I know, but if you read it and liked it, or even (Princess forbid) want me to keep going, a word of encouragement never hurt my pace. Plus, I'm always trying to "ponify" more 40k terms (mostly the pseudo-latin ones) for later use, so if you can think of a way to fit horse terminology into, say, Arbites, Astartes etc, you'd do me a service.
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