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34323 No. 34323
In response to assorted emails and IMs, I've decided to delete a few older threads that contain my assorted stories and put together a thread where my completed works are listed, and my current projects are described. I find it more efficient if the interested parties have one place to look to find out what I'm doing. Feel free to read through these if you like and critique if you please.


Two Ponies ( http://bit.ly/kmJM67 ) - [sad] A story about a pony who loved dearly, and those he left behind.

Kindness ( http://bit.ly/oJO3qG ) - [sad] An alternate history tale: "How would the other five ponies have fared, if Twilight decided to go back to Canterlot instead of staying in Ponyville?" This one features Fluttershy.

of Moon and Memory ( http://bit.ly/qo8RKq ) - [grimdark] A series of eight single-page vignettes about the lost histories of Luna / Nightmare Moon, told from her perspective.

Limericks & Longjohns ( http://bit.ly/quxDaQ ) - [random] A response to the prompt, "Describe a pony's first week in Canterlot".

Projects, as they can change, will be added as follow-up posts.
Again, all are welcome to comment and critique. I only ask that you keep it civil.
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>> No. 51694
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And now... I want someone to write this... like, actually write this and not just write a troll fic.

Please post this idea here: >>51689
>> No. 54252

I'll take those internets, now.
>> No. 54255
We'll see about that!
>> No. 54258
Amazing. Truly amazing. I never thought I'd see the day a Sonic crossover flew.

My most sincere congratulations, dear sir.
>> No. 54264
Starting review... now!
Full colons have the word after them capitalized!
Animals don't need a large brain to speak. Whales brains are several time larger than our entire body, yet they're far less intelligent than a Dolphin. Crows are incredibly smart, able to figure out puzzles that require thinking as far as ten steps ahead. Just a little educational tip ;p.

Parents came home, will continue on PSP later. So far, very good.
>> No. 54276

Humans, Chimpanzees, Elephants, Dolphins, and Crows as well I believe have brains that, proportional to their bodies, are larger than they should be, so yeah. Don't quote me on that, though.
>> No. 54308
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Hmmm... I'm afraid I can only offer half an internet, since you were missing the yin to Robotnik's yang. Since it was well-written, I'll grant an additional 1/4 internet, and pretend that the story couldn't be applied to half of the NES games' villains.

If you want that last piece of internet you'll have to write a chapter where Sonic crosses over, believing that Robotnik has gone to subvert a different species, only to find his arch-nemesis is a mellowed-out pony. Or something like that, as long as it includes Sonic.

Good job.
>> No. 54318
That's the sequel I intend, sir. Sonic shows up a year later and refuses to listen to tales of reform. =)
>> No. 54336
You got... some one on the internet to apologize for being a jerk to you? ( In the EqD comments...) Holy...
>> No. 54337
I know, right? I'm tempted to divide by zero and see what happens.
>> No. 54353
If you do, you'll have to make a good Sonic X Naruto story as payment to the internet gods.

Also, great minds think alike, eh?
>> No. 54366
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Holy Crap. Fanart! Link below, image attached.

Credit goes to GiantMosquito from the ATG group on DA. =)
>> No. 54495
4.4. It's got a 4.4 rating, and 202 comments. If it makes it to 4.5 I've already promised to eat Sonic merchandise. On camera.
*looks on eBay*
Damnit. I may have just trolled MYSELF.
>> No. 55167
You didn't say you had to eat it whole though. Just on camera.
>> No. 61373

It's been edited a little to reflect new canon (Discord, Luna Eclipsed) and seems to be doing well over there. If you've not read it yet, give it a shot!

Note: GrimDark
>> No. 61399
Seconded. Will it blend?

(I must read this thing now.)
>> No. 63071
It's just hit EQD. I'd love to hear your thoughts.

Justice (http://bit.ly/q5aYo5) - [normal] [crossover] Worker's building a life for himself, but what happens when he learns he owes his happiness to a forbidden act?
>> No. 63113
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Why not post updates on tumblr too.
I mean, sure, I could just hunt you down and ask what you've finished lately, but it takes precious time where I could be screaming at the rubber walls, enjoyably reading more of your works.
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That's a great idea. Dankeschoen. I knew I kept you chained in the basement liked you for a reason. I'll update my tumblr when I get home tonight.
>> No. 63121
I'm just busting open Order from Chaos. I've heard great things, and I've been looking forward to reading it.
>> No. 63986
Ladies and Gentlemen (and Kim), I give you Twilight Snarkle vs Sonic the Hedgehog.
This is the result of my bet that my story would NOT receive a 5 star rating. Well, it did. And here I am eating a comic.
My obligation has now been met.
>> No. 64016
Posting to EqD? ^^
>> No. 64029
>Finally get around to reading Justice (put it ahead of even the new chapter of Fo:E: Figured it'd be a shorter read, but your 57 pages beg to differ)
>See Sergeant Sturm
You really do care! :D

Also, loving it so far. I'm only at page twenty, so I'll give you a bit more praise once I'm done.
>> No. 64041
Oh, you dirty cheat you, not even properly putting Sonic into Equestria and instead leaving it on a cliffhanger.
I eagerly await the next act :D.
Minor gripe, but I would imagine Worker would try to get Celestia to remove the rest of the ponies before he started talking, but I understand it you did it for plot reasons. Maybe address it by having him think about it and then dismissing the idea or Celestia not allowing it?
>> No. 64057
I considered that, but Skyshine had constantly refused to listen about his past, and he needed to tell her.
Maybe I'll elaborate on -that- point when I go through for edits.
>> No. 64089
I say leave it as it is. I thoroughly loved it.
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I say touch on it in part 3.
Seeing as it's on EqD, it's cut and printed. You did leave the rest of the town open to comment.
>> No. 64094
>Seeing as it's on EqD, it's cut and printed.
This this this.
>> No. 64096
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>Past Sins
>> No. 64097
I laughed out loud at the office. Damn you. =)
>> No. 64098
What do you do for work?
Unless that's too personal.
>> No. 64099
Right now, I do minor DBA work but my primary focus is on remote-administration for a interstate call center network. I fix their machines so people can call in and have them fix THEIR machines.
>> No. 64102
How meta.
>> No. 74202
I should be getting back to work on the last story of Order from Chaos soon, and hope to have it done by the end of January at the latest. This is not a repeat from November, or December. (Yes, it is.)

Saged for your pleasure.
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The third and final story in the Robotnik arc will be posted before March 30, and hopefully by Feb 28, depending on how much time I can devote to Teh Editz.

You may now go about your business.
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It's only been a year or so. I can wait a little longer...

>I should be getting back to work on the last story of Order from Chaos soon, and hope to have it done by the end of January at the latest. This is not a repeat from November, or December.
Dirty rotten liar.
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It has arrived.
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>> No. 127178
I think you owe him the rest of those internets, now.
>> No. 127215
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Epilogue added.
>> No. 127218
Shouldn't that image be tagged NSFW for copious amounts of boob?
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Oh lookie. I resurrected at the near perfect-ish time.

AND I have just a few hours to blow too!
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Having read it, I do like the fact that you hung a lampshade on the crux of the story. Pointing out that one little white lie could have averted the whole thing, and taking an active choice in picking the outcome.

But no one checks out pchan anyways these days.
>> No. 127585
I do, so there. <3
Thank you, Minty!
>> No. 127586
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Would you object to me maybe possibly probably not making an alternate ending to the story because I'm weird like that?
>> No. 127593
Apparently my IP is banned from work. Neat, huh?
Anyway, sure. After all, I trolled my own readership.
>> No. 127595
You ate a comic book.
>> No. 127599
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Astute as always, Minty.
>> No. 127605
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No, I mean, how much can you really troll a group of people you're willing to do something as extreme as that on an off handed comment?

Many people say things they're not willing to follow through on. It's one of the basic tenants of trolling for responses. So I'm not sure if anyone in this transaction is being successfully trolled.

Maybe the outlier who's looking for a non-weird Sonic the Hedgehog crossover?
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