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Hello! I'm Squeak, and this is my third thread, that's so cool! Thank you to everyone who takes the time to post here telling me what they think, or just drops by to pal around. I do adore your feedback and random musings. I'm the writer of several fics, the most popular being Number 12, and Traveler, which are Doctor Whoof stories, You can read them, and all my other stories, in the handy guide below.

In anycase, in Squeaky tradition, I'll post my newest fic in the header: Gaia a short chapter story staring Fluttershy, a strange mare called Flower and a series of events which culminate in a great Equestrian secret being revealed:

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/635/Gaia-

As for all my other stories (Gun With Occasional Pony, The Catastrophic Case of the Cutie Mark Crusaders, Etc.) Check out this handy guide!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fN8-rYbzCiWro_4onp7JtdW3IxnvXcv6muvUGpw_CYs/edit?hl=en_US


Onwards and Upwards!
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>>70409
>> No. 70490
>>70408
As I've said before, I'm still onboard for Traveler and Gun. If you need a second opinion or suggestions, I've always got several (hundred) ideas floating around, just waiting for me to unleash them on a hapless writer such as yourself.
>> No. 71923
>>70409
........and here I was about to post on FiMchan's MadMax asking if anyone knows anything on you....

...tsk.

<hugs>

Quit scarying ponies!
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>>70490

No need Lights, Squeaky's got their grove back! Things are on a roll once again. Not long now!

>>71923
Sorry Raggedy! I shall have to check in more often so you don't send evil creatures of the night to check on my well being.
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>>72219
Tyger! Tyger! burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?

In what distant deeps or skies
Burnt the fire of thine eyes?
On what wings dare he aspire?
What the hand dare sieze the fire?

And what shoulder, & what art.
Could twist the sinews of thy heart?
And when thy heart began to beat,
What dread hand?


>Shy throws something wriggling into the pot
>Dash stares into Squeak's eyes
>Pink just stands there and gnaws on a chocolate bar with a dumb smile
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>>72945

Dash is starting to creep me out....

Can I have some of that Chocolate?
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>>72945
>dumb smile

Also, hope to see that new fic soon, Squeaks. You must be hard at work since I haven't seen you for a bit.
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So, my goal for the day is to get the newest chapter of Traveler into Light's editing room by the end of the day. I'm looking over it now.

Though....it's not the end. I've kept you guys waiting far too long. This chapter is bordering the 30k mark after a writing session today and that's ridiculous for one chapter anyway. So, you shall have something to read soon if all goes well.
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>>73355
>30K
Well, fuck.
Is it at all possible for you to send them to me in smaller chunks next time? I'm going to have to write off saturday or sunday now...
>> No. 73362
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>>73358

Ah, let me rephrase this, what I mean to say is I've got 30k, but I'm breaking off a chunk of that and sending it to you for the chapter to be released. The chapter I'm planning on putting out should be no more than 10k or so. So I am doing as you suggested.
>> No. 73368
>>73362
Oh, thank sweet Celestia.
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I come bearing gifts!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/18wfFPM21N5sB_SvC5twewQGTUDPE1e28suO1RKi8l7s/edit?hl=en_US

Happy Holidays.
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Um
<flicks open a book on "Earf & Her CuFtoms">

Happy Hare Krishna everyone!

No, wait... um... Harakiri?

<flips a page>

Halloween?

Ah! Merry Cross-Mass!

Lotsa luv, huggsies, candy-coated cheese, dried-frog pills, celery and avoid the pears!



>>73789
This being said I will...
...have to wait with reading till family leaves (probably tomorrow) to read this in peace and quiet.

>.>
<.<

<Jumpglomphugsqueeeeeezes Squeak>

I swear the filename was "YAY!" when I clicked the Reply button!
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>>73789
Squeak . . . I know you have more chapters.

You said you did. You said you had more.

You're holding out on me, aren't you?

Where are you words Squeaks? I want more of your words. GIVE ME MORE TRAVELER SQUEAKS! I KNOW YOU HAVE THE NEXT CHAPTER GIVE IT TO ME! I'VE GOT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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>>74351
>pic related

I want to taste the new worrrrds!

...................in/b4 Squeak didn't submit as he accidentally all the Mane Cast. ;D

____________________________________
Spoilers!
____________________________________
No, really, if you didn't read up, at this point you might wish to look away, unless you did read in which case you may look if you were a nice pony.

...but really, it contains spoilers. Though with the speed at which this thread rolls, if you didn't read the story by the point of me writing this, and I happen to live in the FUTURE I really do, 6 hours forwards to you. I know, amazing ain't it? No, the game sucks.12 6 18 9 5 then you probably have it coming for being so slow.

1. Squeak gets hugs.
2. D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
3. Melvin? Can't you just cut it to "Mel"? Extra points as its non-sexual as it goes At least for people of my language as it can stand for male\female
4...........hmm... Matrix?
5. Someone forgot about one [ " ] in text. Light? I'm looking at you. (Refer to icon b. to the left]
6. I still remember Squeak saying "Dr Who Weekly"
7. Loved it.
8. Squeak is a cruel, cruel pony.
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Arr! Curse ye, Squeak! Curse ye!

Ye get back in 'ere and submit more stories or t' least bit answer our questions and draw those promised pictures!

Daaaaamn you Squeeaaaaaak!
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>>74351
>>74421
>>75017

Wow...ever get the feeling you're about to be murde-....Umm....I mean hugged by adoring fans?

Anyway more out soon!

Slywit, Holding out on you? I have no idea what you mean!...You silly...silly person.

Raggedy:
1. Raggedy gets hugs
2. Happy you found it cute...Though not everyone would describe a Raggedy as 'Cute'
3. Melvin seems like a more Doctor-y sort of name. Though we shall see what surprises I have in store for our little Mel...Muhahaha
4. Let's see how deep the rabbit hole goes.
5. Actually he had the day off, so I must stab myself to preserve my honor. Hold my katana.
6. Has it been a week yet? If not I might be able to keep to that yet!
7. yay! It is Raggedy approved!
8. Yes. Yes I am.

Threepwood.....And suddenly there were pirates. Working on all those things!

As for questions, shoot away! I am eager to please.
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Forgot to post this here:

New Caramel's Light:

Gdoc:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XUCSj4tpg5Ha3QBb5N3Gn6s_OoWi6Mwmngus03hWSKM/edit?hl=en_US

Fimfiction:

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/780/Caramel’s-Light

Traveler and Gaia up next coming right up with a side of fries!
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And then no one saw Squeak EVER AGAIN.

>>75477
>As for questions, shoot away! I am eager to please.

Squeak, what is the meaning of life, universe and all that jazz?

>>70486
>>77622
...and I just realised what your first filename says. I feel silly :D
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>>79236

Oh god...
I... I DIDN'T KNOW.
>> No. 79346
>>79236
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rn4EYvFGzV8&feature=channel_video_title

The answer? "Cakes".
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>>79329
It's okay, shhh, it's okay. Filenames happen to us all.
..would you like a muffin? <points at plate with @pic>


>'tsundere' in filename
Japan, what are you doing in my MLP FiM?

>>79346
...um. No. Try again?
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>>79236

It's not 42 despite common belief, it's actually 42 1/2.

Sorry about the wait...again... If it helps my kitchen was on fire this morning. So Karma is trying to get me to hurry up!

But I haven't been idle. check this out!

It's for the plays.
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That feel when Fimfiction now emails me whenever someone follows, watches, or faveorites a story of mine.

SWEET BOUNCING BABY BUNNY RABBITS

I knew I was well liked, but I I didn't know people liked me THAT much. Good lord, have I been linked somewhere? This is bloody ridiculous in a fantastically confidence boosting kind of way.

I really need to step up chapter production.
>> No. 80793
>>80774

You mean recently? Because I know I've seen your stories on EQD before. That's how I found caramel's light.

(which is amazing)
>> No. 89026
>>80793

Wow, this place got dusty.

Well guess what? I gots me a laptop for the night, and the updates are a'flowin.

Gaia Ch5:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/635/Gaia-

Gun With Occasional Pony Ch8:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/105/Gun%2C-With-Occasional-Pony

The Guns chapter was going to be longer, but I cut it off a bit to finish the ideas I'm working on for the next one.

Next up, Caralight and Traveler!
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>>89026
>New chapters
>more chapters coming
>MFW
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>>89142
>>89026
N3W CH4PT3RS? N3W CH4PT3RS 4R3 GOOD.
BUT W3 N33D MOR3! W3 N33D MOR3, SQU34K!

...UNL3SS YOU W4NT TO S33 MR W1T SW1MM1NG 1N TH3 R1V3R?
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Annnnnnd New Caralight!

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/780/Caramel's-Light

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ug8HCHhLJxbjaxaIaVdBXPicoewkSkJK9927eh3W_xo/edit



(Traveler's next!)
>> No. 95177
D:
Poor Caramel! Things seemed to be going so well for him, too...
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>>95177
Wouldn't be a good story without a bit of conflict. Twilight seemed quite understanding and nice.
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>>95190
Till she forgets her pills...


>cough

...Traveller~?
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Oh wow! That's such a nice surprise, this thread is still here.

Anyway, updating coming, in the mean time, there's a project that's open for writers called This Equestrian Life, it's not off the ground yet, but will be soon. It's a play on the old radio show This American Life, for more info on what's being looked for google that. But generally just about three small vignettes per episode, perhaps with different writers and stuff, each going around a central theme. I haven't got that much info at the moment, but It'll probably be getting off to a start before long. I'm helping with networking for the most part, so more info as I get it.

On the other side, again updates comings! Working on Traveler all of today.
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>>109672
Whoa! Hey there Squeak. At first I thought this was a new thread, until I saw the timestamp on the OP. I can't wait to see what this does if you're active again, though I never met you before.
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>>109699

I should be if everything goes according to plan!

Hello, nice to meet you, have you read anything of mine?
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>>109717
Probably not. I wasn't a brony for long before I got into writing, and I mostly focused on my own work before I came here. It's possible though, I have read several stories on Fimfiction, although I don't have a lot of time for that site anymore, sadly.
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>>109722

That's fine, thanks for stopping by and saying hello regardless, that's always nice. Hope your writing is going well.
>> No. 109792
Wait a tic... Squeak, As in Number 12 Squeak, as in the story that was adapted into a wonderful audio drama by Pony in a Box productions? That Squeak?!

>Reads the beginning of Number 12

It is you! I bow to your greatness. Quick question, do have anything to do with the audio version? Weather or not you do, its still nice to meet... your typed text. Just wanted to say hello.
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>>109792

That's me! Hello!

And I do, I'm founder and head of Ponyinabox Productions, I direct, and write the Doctor Whooves Adventures, handle some casting and the occasional bit of brick-a-brack that I can do with the support of my lovely little team.

Nice to meet you! Very nice of you to say hello. I am nothing special though, just a writer who happens to try to do a lot of things at once.
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>>109967
I freaking love your work. The entire crew is top notch.

I think its awesome that you can take an idea that at it's heart, you have to admit, is very silly and make it work so well. The show is very funny, but not for the reasons one would think. It's not funny because it's the doctor as a pony, it's funny because of the personalities at work. You play it so straight and it works, that it actually somewhat annoys me. It amazes me that something like that can work so well. I'm invested not because of the core idea but the story behind it. I love the work you and your team (As well as the Jam Jar and his work on the Vinyl Scratch tapes, another idea that at it's heart shouldn't be as gripping as it is.) produce. I look forward to the rest of the series.

... Sorry to kinda geek out on you like that... it's awesome to just have some correspondence with you. I actually considered watching Doctor Who because of Number 12. Your one of the ponies that makes this fan base so awesome, at least to me.

... I feel I'm becoming the gushing fanboy at this point, so I'll take my leave.

Bye!
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>>109975

Um..wow...thanks! It means a lot to hear people enjoy my work so much. That's why I make it! When I first had the idea on the /collab/ board about a year back I had no idea things would turn out as well as the did in the end. But with a lot of luck, and an amazing team of people, we were able to make something that people enjoyed, and I love hearing people's opinions on it, so thank you for taking the time to gush, it's lovely to know people are enjoying the plays we spend so much time making, and that my writing in those plays works so well. It's very nice to meet you, and a pleasure to k now I've got such a big fan.
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>>110078
Stay awesome, Squeak! And good luck on your next project.

It was great to... speak... type... whatever this is with you.

Bye!
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Hello Ponychan!

I'm Squeak, head of Ponyinabox Productions, the guys who make the Doctor Whooves Adventures, and very soon a few other projects as well. We've been getting a lot of requests to make an animation of our audio dramas, and we're finally buckling down to do it! But we need some help, namely in the form of a storyboardist. We need someone to help draw and plan the frames to help make an animation we can all be proud of! This person would be asked to draw out the frames of the following short from the series, so that this guy: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BmGt0EhVToE has a guideline to finish up the animation process!

If you'd like any information on anything just email us at [email protected]

The short we'll be animating is here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=afEQzEizgSY&feature=relmfu

If you're interested in joining us at Ponyinabox Productions please post or email us a frame from the play above so we can get started!
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>>110469

Annddd...that was meant for the /collab/ board. Oh well, onwards to post it there!
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>>110469
And I found one! Yay!

Storyboards here:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=roIE83nDUtE&feature=player_embedded
>> No. 111200
>>111114
Hey Squeak, any chance that you could make an alternate mp3 download of Crossed Wires? The one you have on the video can't be used and it's my favorite short that your team has done so I wish I could have it.

Whatever you choose, I'd be cool with it.

(You may remember me as the gushing fanboy.)
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>>111200

Oh! I'm sorry, somehow I just saw this!

Here's a handy dandy alternate downloads page!

http://askponyinabox.tumblr.com/post/23015837805/downloads-downloads-for-everything
>> No. 112020
>>112016
thanks
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And they never found the body.

THE END.
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